The graph below compare the number of cosmetic procedures performed on males and females in South Korea in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below compare the number of cosmetic procedures performed on males and females in South Korea in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given
two
bar charts depict the number of cosmetic surgeries carried out by genders in South Korea during 2004.
Overall
, the total number of
sugery
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surgery
performed by women was slightly higher than
men
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. Meanwhile, the
two
types of cosmetic procedures - Laser Skin Resurfacing and Rhinoplasty - were the shared surgical choices of both sexes. Despite there
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similarities among the surgical preferences, the operation counts varied between genders. The number of Laser Skin Restructuring performed by men surpassed that of Phinoplasty by approximately one-third;
Nonetheless
, it was vice versa for women, resulting in the
two
types of surgeries ranking top
two
and three respectively. Meanwhile, the top and least conducted cosmetic procedures differ as well. Around 110
thousands
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times of Liposuction were completed on Korean ladies, leading to the least popular choice. At the same time, they were in
favor
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of doing Eyelid Surgery (310 more thousands of
operation
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done). For men, they chose hair transplantation the most out of the five surgeries -
two
times more than the least operated Facelift (less than 20
thousands
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counts).
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