The charts below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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three kinds of

nutrients

which

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sodium

, saturated fat and added

sugar

in normal

meals

such

as breakfast, dinner, lunch and

snacks

. Units are measured by percentages.

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from

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perspective, the dinner

meals

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nutrients

which

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sodium

and saturated fats,

in contrast

, the breakfast has low

nutrients

all

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meals

. The

piecharts

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pie charts

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show that

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the

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dinner

meals

has

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the highest

nutrients

which

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just above

two fifths

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sodium

and 37% of saturated fat

whereas

the

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added

sugar

is only 22

percentage

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per cent

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. The lunch

meals

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the

secons

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second

highest

nutrients

of the three

meals

which is

sodium

and saturated fat

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the same amount of

nutrients

that

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23% and the added

suagr

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sugar

is 16%.

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, breakfast has very low

nutrients

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sodium

14% and 17% of saturated fat

along with

10% of added

sugar

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snacks

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the minimum amount of

nutrients

in all three

meals

but

snacks

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more added

sugar

nutrients

which is around half

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low

nutrients

snacks

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Art classes, such as painting and drawing, as important to a child's development as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Because of the global economy, many goods including what we use as everyday basics produced by other countries have to be transported for a long distance. TO what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Should high school students be required to study many different subjects at the same time, or should they study only three or four subjects at a time? Do you agree or disagree?