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The line graph illustrates the proportion of tourists to England who attended four different attractions in Brighton.

The line graph illustrates the proportion of tourists to England who attended four different attractions in Brighton.
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The chart gives information about the
percentage
 of
visitors
 to
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the
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the
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UK who visited various places in
Brigton
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Brighton
.
Overall
 it is seen that
proportion
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the proportion
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 of
tourists
 to
pavillion
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pavilion
 and pier increased.
while
,
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apply
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art
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the art
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 gallery and festival ratio of
visitors
 decreased from 1980 to 2010. In detail,
pavillion
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pavilion
percentage
 of
tourists
 was 23% in 1980.It increased regularly to 28% in 1985 but after
that
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that,
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 a sudden jump
is
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was
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 seen in
proportion
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the proportion
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 of
visitors
 to pavillion (48%) in 1995,
then
 decreased to 31% in 2010.In
case
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the case
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 of
pier
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the pier
a pier
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,10%
people
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of people
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 visited
in
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it in
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 1980.After many fluctuations in
tourists
percentage
, pier
tourists
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tourists'
tourist's
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 proportion
rised upto
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rose up to
 22%
at the end
 of 2010.
On the other hand
,art
gallery
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galleries
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 showed a promising
turn over
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turnover
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 in 1985 with 38%
tourists
 but
in1990
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in 1990
 it plummeted to 20% in 1990 and
then
 remained 20%
visitors
 till 2000.After 2000,the
percentage
 of
visitors
 dropped to
lowest
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the lowest
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 8% in 2010 among all destinations in Brighton.
However
,festival
tourists
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tourist
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 attractions nearly remained
same
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the same
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through out
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throughout
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 the duration from 30% in 1980 to 28% in 2010.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, visitors, tourists with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • tourists
  • attractions
  • trends
  • popularity
  • seasonal variations
  • attendance figures
  • locality
  • predicting
  • data analysis
  • fluctuations
  • peak season
  • decline
  • increment
  • steady
  • plummet
  • surge
  • stagnate
  • benchmark
  • correlate
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