Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this ot only improves their health but also benefits the world. Discuss this viewpoint and give your own opinion.

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awareness of healthy diet

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wide broadcasting by media, more and more people decide not to consume

meat

,

such

as beef, pork, lamb or fish in their

life

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lives

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.

While

they suggest that by doing so, they can enhance their physical condition and even help the

environment

, I personally consider that it can turn out to be some problems for the

health

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and do little help for the world. Undoubtedly, eating without

meat

can bring out some benefits for

health

and

environment

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. From the perspective of

health

, reducing the intake of

meat

means

fewer

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that less

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fat will be consumed at the same time. Since an excessive amount of animal fat may cause

health

problems like obesity and heart disease, it can be a good way to maintain personal body condition. From the perspective of

environment

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, it can reduce

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carbon

emission

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emissions

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. In the food chain of

natural

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world, animals at the higher tiers

are accumulated

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more cycled carbon. Animals like

cow

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cows

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,

pig

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pigs

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and

chicken

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chickens

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can create a

considerate

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amount of carbon during the trading process, including feeding, raising, transporting and selling. Despite all the advantages it may

has

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, eating absolutely without

meat

may actually

leads

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to some negative indications.

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it causes

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insufficient diversity of nutrition. Apart from fat,

meat

also

provide

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protein, which is

the

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fundamental need for

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the human’s

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human’s

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body. Study shows that those people who are vegetarians suffer problems having enough protein, even

they

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if they

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eat lots amount of beans.

The

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balanced diet can actually bring more

health

.

Second,

the consumption of

meat

is basically a circle of life in the world; in

other word

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, it brings less damage

for

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the

environment

than we imagine. The business process may be able to

improved

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to lower

down

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the environmental waste, but not the thing eating the

meat

itself. Even

we

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do that, the help is quite limited.

Such

discussion about whether eating

meat

is good or not may never cease.

However

,

while

some claim how beneficial it can be for

health

and

environment

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to stop eating

meat

, I suggest that only

the

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balanced diet can truly build a strong and healthy body.