Some people think that the increasingly flexible working environment nowadays, such as working at home, has a positive impact on workers' lives. Others, however, feel this development is just a means for organisations such as private companies to exploit workers for profit. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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, has a good impact on employees' lives. Others,

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just a means for organisations

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as private companies to exploit workers for their own advantage. In my point of view, I truly side

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offline job at the office because is more efficient and

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. On the one hand, more and more individuals

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enjoying a flexible place for

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some problems may appear. The first problem is community would end up with poor

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management of

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before they start to consider it. The reason for

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situation is that when

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from home they believe

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method of

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will bring more profit

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them, but it does not.

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, the association would give overtask for their

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finish it without good

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management.

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of

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situation it is the

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being exploited and the

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running

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earn huge financial percentages. Another issue is

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with their family at

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homes

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. It will encourage

people

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to refuse their

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for

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the

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people

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end up with

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unfinished

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task

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tasks

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from their

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.

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, working 5 days a week at

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is more efficient

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some reasons. One of which is

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have high-quality

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management for their

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in

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authority in

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as,

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of

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for the

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by creating a schedule to increase the balance between

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and rest days.

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style of

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may increase

productivity

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the productivity

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of employees and improve the income of the

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also

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more advantages for the employees they can achieve good range and some high performance. In conclusion, online

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from

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homes

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may bring

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of advantages for both

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employee

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and the

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but the

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overbalance the

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benefits

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,

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working offline at the office can maintain

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life in the

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and the

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. To suggest, a good quality of

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company

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a company

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can be seen from the way their

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work

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so the main better is to taking care for their

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and the prosperity will come alone.