Take a look at the graphic and complete the task. The table shows average calorie intake in the United States over a period of time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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The graph shows the
salary
comparison and the average working hours
per week
of different professions in the UK from the start and after three years.
Overall
, it can be seen from the graph that all the incomes of employees in different fields increase
during the Wrong verb form
have increased
last
three years. It is noticeable that an underground driver has the highest salary
at under £50.000 and reaches a peak at over £50.000, while
a nurse has the lowest salary
at about £16.000 and increases sharply to around £19.000 three years later.
From the table, it is clear that
a teacher and a firefighter spend the longest time at work. Their average working hours
per week
is 55, while
an underground driver only takes 36 hours
per week
at work.
It can be concluded from both the graph and the table that an underground driver earns the highest income and spends fewer hours
working per week
, while
the salary
rate of a teacher is in the middle but takes the longest time at work.Submitted by yeshomeclass on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salary, hours, week with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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