The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram gives information about the process
coffee
is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops.
Overall
, there are a variety of stages to produce coffee
from harvest to coming products for sale in the markets.
A deep analysis of the diagram provided reveals that the coffee
beans will be drought after being picked. In the next stage, the beans coffee
are roasted and then
cooled rapidly to grind. After grinding the beans they will be mixed with hot water to prepare for the next stage is to strain the mixture.
It can be seen from the diagram that the mixture coffee
is frozen and then
grinds the frozen liquid. In addition
that mixture is drought in a vacuum to evaporate. Finally
, after all stages finish it will be packed in jars and labelled for sale in supermarkets and shops.Submitted by yeshomeclass on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
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