The bar chart illustrates the number of people in the UK eating more than 5 portions of vegetables and fish per day.

The bar graph explains data about how many percentages of fish and vegetables were consumed by males,females and children a day in Britain from 2011 to 2017.

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women dominated approximately all the years

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men reached a significant increase

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, eating these products among youngsters remained the same level over time.

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, women ate 20% of vegetables and fish in 2011, 2012,

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years, afterwards , consuming given products grew to 27% in 2014 and 33 % in 2015 .In 2016, the percentage of eating vegetables and fish peaked among females. Its portion was almost 38%. Eventually,

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rate decreased noticeably to 30% in 2017.

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, the portion of the consumption of them males rose year by year .It was 17, 18, 19 and 22 % in 2011, 2012, 2013, 2014 , and 24% in 2015 .

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, in 2016, the amount of food declined to 23% .

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rate increased to 28%

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. The figures for children the share of consuming food was 10 % at the beginning

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period in 2011.

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, rates fluctuated around 14% and finished at a peak of 15 % by the end of

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