The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)
The line graph illustrates information about three various types of resources which took part in
air
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the air
pollution
process in the UK over the given 15
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15-year
year
time period, between 1990 and 2005. Units are measured in million
tonnes
.
Overall
, in the
terms of Correct article usage
apply
air
pollutants
, industry
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the industry
was
experienced the highest proportion of Unnecessary verb
apply
the
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apply
this
process while
households and transport were stay
at Change the verb form
were stayed
were staying
the
below 2 Correct article usage
apply
million
tonnes
of air
pollutants
given the 15
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15-year
year
time zone. Both 3 different types of air
pollution
resources declined dramatically from 1990 to 2005 year
, respectively.
On the one hand, the amount of pollution
by industry resources was seen a sharply
decrease till Change the adverb
sharp
1999
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the 1999
year
, approximately
3 Change preposition
with approximately
million
tonnes
of pollution
. After 6 years, this
figure stayed at 4 million
tonnes
till 2002, then
it ent
down slightly.
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went
On the other hand
, the transport consumption was
fluctuated Unnecessary verb
apply
at
the same range ,Change preposition
in
such
as 1.5 and 2 million
tonnes
of air
pollutants
during the whole year
period. Turning to households
figures, for the first 9 Change the noun form
household
year
, the amount of Change to a plural noun
years
pollution
measured in the same stage, while
it fell to 0.5 million
tonnes
of air
pollutants
, approximately. Following to
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apply
this
, the total air
pollution
accounted a
sharp decrease in Change preposition
for a
term
of Fix the agreement mistake
terms
million
tonnes
, over 15 year
period.Submitted by babayeva.ilayda on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words air, pollution, year, million, tonnes, pollutants with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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