The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.  Write at least 150 words.   (20 mins.)
The line graph illustrates information about three various types of resources which took part in
air
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the air
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pollution
process in the UK over the given
15
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15-year
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year
time period, between 1990 and 2005. Units are measured in
million
tonnes
.
Overall
, in
the
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terms of
air
pollutants
,
industry
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the industry
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was
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experienced the highest proportion of
the
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apply
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this
process
while
households and transport
were stay
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were stayed
were staying
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at
the
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apply
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below 2
million
tonnes
of
air
pollutants
given the
15
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15-year
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year
time zone. Both 3 different types of
air
pollution
resources declined dramatically from 1990 to 2005
year
, respectively. On the one hand, the amount of
pollution
by industry resources was seen a
sharply
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sharp
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decrease till
1999
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the 1999
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year
,
approximately
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with approximately
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3
million
tonnes
of
pollution
. After 6 years,
this
figure stayed at 4
million
tonnes
till 2002,
then
it
ent
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went
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down slightly.
On the other hand
, the transport consumption
was
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fluctuated
at
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in
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the same range ,
such
as 1.5 and 2
million
tonnes
of
air
pollutants
during the whole
year
period. Turning to
households
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household
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figures, for the first 9
year
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years
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, the amount of
pollution
measured in the same stage,
while
it fell to 0.5
million
tonnes
of
air
pollutants
, approximately. Following
to
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apply
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this
, the total
air
pollution
accounted
a
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for a
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sharp decrease in
term
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terms
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of
million
tonnes
, over 15
year
period.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words air, pollution, year, million, tonnes, pollutants with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • air pollutants
  • emissions
  • decrease
  • increase
  • stable
  • fluctuate
  • trend
  • peak
  • drop
  • significant
  • legislation
  • technological advancements
  • comparative analysis
  • contributors
  • households
  • transport
  • industry
  • regulation
  • pattern
  • anomaly
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