The graphs below show the opening and closure and the types of magazines that opened in Southern Europe between 1995-2015 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The graphs illustrate the opening and
closure
, and the opened
types of Verb problem
apply
magazines
since
1995 to 2015.
Change preposition
from
Overall
, the number
of opened magazines
hasa
been decreasing, but Correct your spelling
has
closure
Correct article usage
the closure
number
has increased. However
, "Entartainment
and TV" Correct your spelling
Entertainment
has
become Change the verb form
have
dominant
type, and the lowest places have been reached by "Correct article usage
the dominant
business
" and "others
".
Firstly
, in 1995, opening
of Add an article
the opening
magazines
has
reached 250 Unnecessary verb
apply
pcs
, and closure
has become close to 125 pcs
. However
, in 2005, the number
of closure
of Fix the agreement mistake
closures
magazines
has been decreasing
from 125 to about 75 Wrong verb form
decreased
pcs
, even so
opening has increased to 400 and decreased Add the comma(s)
so,
into
about 375 Change preposition
to
pcs
. Since 2005, data about opening and closure
have changed in reverse. Closure
has increased to about 360 from 75 Add an article
The closure
pcs
and reached record
Add an article
a record
number
, close to 380 pcs
. Nevertheless
, opening
of Add an article
the opening
magazines
which had had high scores before has been
fallen down close to 175 Unnecessary verb
apply
pcs
.
Secondly
, on pie
chart, Add an article
a pie
the pie
dominant
type has shown Correct article usage
the dominant
by
"Change preposition
as
Entartainment
and TV" which bypassed "music" with 5%, "Hobbies" with 14%, "Correct your spelling
Entertainment
Business
" with 29% and "Others
" with 30 %. The second dominant type had been reached by "Music" with 30% while
"Hobbies" has
achieved 21%. The two types that Unnecessary verb
apply
placed
on Add a missing verb
are placed
ranks
have become "Correct article usage
the ranks
Business
" and "Others
". "Business
" has had 9%, 4% more than "Others
" which had taken 5%.Submitted by aistmenr6 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words closure, magazines, number, business, others, pcs with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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