Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?

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are many faculties and freedom

subjects

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in the university so the

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should select

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the course that

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science

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. The following paragraphs will examine the cause of

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student

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and the effect

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society.

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is one of the most important

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in the lesson and many kinds of occupations require candidates with the

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background knowledge. In many countries, there are specific classes for

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who are good at

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and mathematics. In my opinion, these

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do not know what they are interested in and

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class will make them feel outstanding and better than the other classes. When they learn in the university, there are many optional modules that make them know what interested in.

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caused, some

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to lose their inspiration in

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and change majors or faculty to the other.

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science

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is more difficult than art

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as music and sport. For

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society, it is undeniable that

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are built and used today because of

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science

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knowledge.

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, not enough

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choose

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to the lack of scientist including engineer who needs strong

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background knowledge. For some country,

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them slower to develop than other

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the country

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has many

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research and think the new innovation for developing their country. In conclusion, not enough

science

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students

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is mainly caused by optional modules and

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to learn

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of scientists and countries

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slow development.

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task achievement

Your essay touches on the topic but does not fully explore the reasons why students avoid science subjects or the full effects on society. Develop your response with more specific reasons, such as cultural perceptions of science subjects, societal values, or employment trends. Include more detailed examples and explore the consequences more thoroughly for higher task achievement.

coherence cohesion

Your essay has an introduction and conclusion, but these sections are brief and could be more developed. Ensure your introduction clearly outlines the points you will discuss, and your conclusion effectively summarizes these points. Each paragraph should have a clear main idea and be elaborately supported by examples or explanations.

Your opinion

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If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

266 words

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societal norms
access to information
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economic growth
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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?

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