The table below describes water usage for 3 different purposes in 6 countries in 2003.
The provided table chart illustrates the percentage of
water
utilisation for three various objectives in six nations in the year 2003.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the most of nations used water
for agricultural purposes
, except Canada
and Australia. In contrast
, Canada
and Australia utilised water
for domestic objective
mostly.
Fix the agreement mistake
objectives
To begin
with, the highest percentage of water
utilisation for agricultural objectives was the
United Kingdom at 90%, followed by China at 87%, India at 82%, and Japan at 66% respectively. Change preposition
in the
Secondly
, in terms of the proportion of water
usage for industrial purposes
, Canada
had the highest consumption of water
at 32%, followed by Japan at 15% respectively. However
, the majority of water
usage for domestic purposes
was in Australia and Canada
, each 65% and 63% respectively.
In conclusion, Canada
almost used water
for domestic and industrial objectives. Despite that, the United Kingdom, China, India, and Japan consumed water
for agricultural purposes
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