Some people think that girls should take husband’s name after marriage while others feel that they should not follow this age old tradition. What is your opinion?

Hi Nancy, Thanks a lot for your email I hope you
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doing
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you asked me several questions about
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paties
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. Honestly, I visit
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parties really seldom, but if I do, I always wear a
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of any popular
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what I want in shops.
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I don’t really like
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. I’d like to know more about
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museum
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teenagers? I’m sorry Nancy, but I have to go help my mom. Write back soon. With love, Fedor
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Ensure that you address the given prompt directly and develop a clear opinion on the issue.
coherence and cohesion
Your essay should have a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. Remember to include these in your structure.
coherence and cohesion
Support your ideas with specific examples and more detailed explanations to demonstrate your understanding of the topic.
task achievement
Avoid veering off-topic. Stay focused on the task at hand and provide a response that is relevant to the prompt given.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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