The chart below shows the average money spent per costumer on various types of equipment in a Canadian sports store
The provided line graph illustrates the median of
expenditure
per customer on different types of sport
material in Canadian sports Change the noun form
sports
store
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stores
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the majority median expenditure
of equipment in Canadian sports stores was football. The minority average payment of sport
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sports
materials
was tennis between 2000 and 2020.
To begin
with, football was the highest expense of equipment in Canadian sports stores at 60 dollars
in 2000, and then
dramatically decreased to 40 dollars
in 2010. There was a significant increase in the mean expenditure
for football materials
to 70 dollars
in 2020. On the contrary
, there was a steady drop in the median expenditure
for tennis materials
from 30 dollars
in 2000 to 10 dollars
in 2020. Moreover
, there was a slight rise in the average expense for swimming materials
from 10 dollars
in 2000 to 30 dollars
in 2020. Lastly
, the median payment for rugby fluctuated from 40 dollars
in 2000 to 30 dollars
in 2020.Submitted by alisa.chuaypalad on
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