Some people say History is one of most important school subjects other people think that, in today world,subject like science and technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, many
people
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advocates
that Change the verb form
advocate
History
has been a forgotten school Use synonyms
subject
. Use synonyms
In addition
, Linking Words
people
state that subjects like Use synonyms
Science
and Technology are taking over the masses. I do not agree with both Use synonyms
statement
because Change to a plural noun
statements
history
and Use synonyms
science
intertwine with one another. In Use synonyms
this
essay, I will mention both views regarding the benefits of those subjects and why we need them to Linking Words
further
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advanced
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advance
the
society as a whole.
On the one hand, Correct article usage
apply
History
as a Use synonyms
subject
has an important role Use synonyms
on
building Change preposition
in
students
love Change noun form
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student's
to
towards their culture. Change preposition
apply
Thus
, will help develop or create a sense of self in their life. Linking Words
This
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also
affects their views toward the world on why we need to learn more about the world’s Linking Words
History
. Use synonyms
For example
, Indonesia is a multicultural country with many different cultural backgrounds. Linking Words
Hence
, Linking Words
why
we must study more about each other cultures to create a stronger bond between us and the Rephrase
apply
people
to create harmony in diversity.
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On the other hand
, Linking Words
Science
and Technology will help benefit everyone through invention and creation in our society. Use synonyms
Science
as a whole helps create a more intelligent human resource to be able to compete with the rest of the world. Use synonyms
Hence
, why Linking Words
subject
related to Use synonyms
science
is Use synonyms
also
a mandatory Linking Words
subject
to learn in every academic institution. Use synonyms
For example
, many Linking Words
people
in Indonesia still believe in supernatural Use synonyms
phenomenon
through education Fix the agreement mistake
phenomena
this
will help them to have a better understanding Linking Words
on
why it is not possible.
In conclusion, we should learn the importance of both Change preposition
of
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subject
in creating a better tomorrow for the Fix the agreement mistake
subjects
people
and the world.Use synonyms
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic and that the supporting sentences are directly related to it. Avoid discussing multiple ideas within a single paragraph without clear demarcation or logical flow.
coherence cohesion
Make sure that an effective opening and closing paragraph frame the essay. This includes restating the topic, summarizing the main points, and clearly expressing your own opinion, making sure it is consistent throughout the essay.
task achievement
Develop your main points with specific details and examples that are directly relevant to the topic. The examples given should be clearer and more directly linked to the arguments presented.
task achievement
Fully address all parts of the task. The essay should provide a balanced discussion of both views mentioned and clearly present your own opinion with specific reasons and examples.
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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
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