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The table below provide information about the consumption and production of potatoes in five parts of the world in 2006.

The table below provide information about the consumption and production of potatoes in five parts of the world in 2006.
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illustrate
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 consuming and
producing
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production
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 rate/ level of
potatoes
 in five
section
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of
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the
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apply
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worldwide in the given year
Overall
 , it can be seen that Europe section consumed
large
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a large
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 number of
potatoes
while
 Asia is able to produce
large
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a large
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 amount of
potatoes
.
To begin
 with , consumption of
potatoes
 display various rate namely Africa just consumed 14,1kg per person . North America's rate showed just under 6,0 kg .
Moreover
 South and Central America
as well as
 Asia were not able to
recieve
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receive
large
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a large
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 portion under the 26. North America and Europe almost achieved 96.1, 57,9. Moving
further
 , Europe and Asia could produce
potatoes
large
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a large
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 proportion
amound
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around
amount
126,3
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of 126,3
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 and 131,2 . But other 3Europen areas produce tiny scale under half 50
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Vocabulary: Replace the words potatoes with synonyms.
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