You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The line charts illustrate the data concerning the enrolments of international
students
as well as
domestic students
in Australian universities from 2001 to 2010. In general, the admissions of foreign students
had increased more rapidly than local students
. Although
the number of local commencing students
had experienced fluctuation, the total amount remained far exceeding the volume of foreign students
during this
period.
In 2001, nearly 10000 international students
enrolled in. With rapid growth, the admissions of overseas students
had reached 40000 in 2010 and complete numbers had increased significantly from 20000 to 80000. The figure of
commencing and total Change preposition
for
students
had trebled over 10 years.
On the other hand
, in 2001 the
Australian universities accepted approximately 175000 domestic Correct article usage
apply
students
, the amount of which had risen and reached the maximum point next
year. Correct article usage
the next
However
, followed by the consecutive decrease from 2002 to 2006, the number had reached the lowest point. Overall
, local students
` enrollments had increased stably from 40000 in 2010 and peaked at 600000 in 2007. While the
growth Correct word choice
The
had
remained flat from 2007 to 2010, influenced by the stagnated increase of Unnecessary verb
apply
new
admitted Australian Change the word
newly
students
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