The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012.
The graph shows how much coffee was exported by three American countries ,namely slight rise over the given period.
Brazil
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Costa
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Rica
and Columbia from 2002 to 2012.
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Overall
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it is clear that
there was a dramatic increase in the amount of coffee exported by Linking Words
Brazil
and Use synonyms
Costa
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Rica
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while
it was Columbia Linking Words
that
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also
worth mentioning that the Linking Words
figure
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Costa
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Rica
was overtaken by that of Use synonyms
Brazil
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at the end
,despite low Linking Words
export
at the start.
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exports
Initially
, in 2002, Linking Words
Costa
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Rica
dominated the amount of coffee Use synonyms
export
,with 15 Wrong verb form
exported
million
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kilograms
.After that, the Use synonyms
figure
had decreased to around 7 Use synonyms
million
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kilograms
,recording the lowest point in its history by 2006.Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, for the next 6 years , the Linking Words
figure
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of
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for
Costa
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Rica
, after a significant decline , began to go up again without downward trends at all , reaching 20 Use synonyms
million
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kilograms
. Use synonyms
Conversely
, the reverse trend was true for Linking Words
Brazil
first stood at about 12 Use synonyms
million
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kilograms
, the Use synonyms
figure
for it rose gradually to 25 Use synonyms
million
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kilograms
with mild fluctuations .Use synonyms
This
meant that it was a new leader ,showing the Linking Words
most
largest proportion among Change the adjective
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three
exporter countries.
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the three
In contrast
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Costa
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Rica
was the only country experiencing always ups and downs ,having both the smallest share at the beginning and the largest Use synonyms
at the end
. At first , it stood out Linking Words
its
relatively small share at 5 Change preposition
with its
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kilograms
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However
, the Linking Words
figure
improved somewhat, reaching over 10 Use synonyms
million
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kilograms
in 2006 ,before dropping to a disappointingly low point of around 2 Use synonyms
million
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kilograms
for the next two years.Use synonyms
Whereas
the Linking Words
figure
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then
increased steadily to 15 Linking Words
million
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kilograms
by the end of the period .Use synonyms
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