The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012.
The graph shows how much coffee was exported by three American countries ,namely slight rise over the given period.
Brazil
,Costa
Rica
and Columbia from 2002 to 2012.
Overall
, it is clear that
there was a dramatic increase in the amount of coffee exported by Brazil
and Costa
Rica
while
it was Columbia that
experiencedCorrect pronoun usage
apply
Correct article usage
a
Moreover
,it is also
worth mentioning that the figure
for Costa
Rica
was overtaken by that of Brazil
at the end
,despite low export
at the start.
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exports
Initially
, in 2002, Costa
Rica
dominated the amount of coffee export
,with 15 Wrong verb form
exported
million
kilograms
.After that, the figure
had decreased to around 7 million
kilograms
,recording the lowest point in its history by 2006.Nevertheless
, for the next 6 years , the figure
of
Change preposition
for
Costa
Rica
, after a significant decline , began to go up again without downward trends at all , reaching 20 million
kilograms
. Conversely
, the reverse trend was true for Brazil
first stood at about 12 million
kilograms
, the figure
for it rose gradually to 25 million
kilograms
with mild fluctuations .This
meant that it was a new leader ,showing the most
largest proportion among Change the adjective
apply
three
exporter countries.
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the three
In contrast
,Costa
Rica
was the only country experiencing always ups and downs ,having both the smallest share at the beginning and the largest at the end
. At first , it stood out its
relatively small share at 5 Change preposition
with its
million
kilograms
.However
, the figure
improved somewhat, reaching over 10 million
kilograms
in 2006 ,before dropping to a disappointingly low point of around 2 million
kilograms
for the next two years.Whereas
the figure
then
increased steadily to 15 million
kilograms
by the end of the period .Submitted by yoqubjonovjamshidbek23 on
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