The diagram below shows how leather goods are produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparison where relevant.
The flow chart depicts the way in which leathers are made for
leather
goods.
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Overall
, there are 8 stages in the whole Linking Words
leather
-producing Use synonyms
process
, beginning with the drying Use synonyms
process
of the skin and ending with the Use synonyms
leather
goods to the customers.
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To begin
with, animal skin was hung in a rope to dry. After drying the skin it was sent by a bus to the factory. Linking Words
Then
, those dry animal skins were put into a lime-water solution . Linking Words
Moreover
, the skins had soaked completely Linking Words
then
it was sent to a flattening Linking Words
process
to make a straight Use synonyms
leather
sheet which was usually used for the next Use synonyms
process
.
In the subsequent stage, the leathers again go through a tannin soaking Use synonyms
process
where water and Use synonyms
vegetable
Fix the agreement mistake
vegetables
was
used as a chemical liquid solution. Wrong verb form
are
Furthermore
, the Linking Words
leather
Use synonyms
process
went into the polishing stage where a roller was used to polish the Use synonyms
leather
. Use synonyms
Next,
the ready sheet went to the factory and it turned into goods for consumers.Linking Words
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