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Fresh water is a limited in some parts of the world. Today, Increasing demand made it a global problem. What are the causes of increasing demand, what measure can government and individuals take to solve problem?

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Fresh
water
 is
our
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apply
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one
 of the essential natural resources but at present, some places
to
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around the world has
water
 scarcity issue and
this
 is considered a global
trouble
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problem
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.
Population
 growth and overuse of agricultural practices are the main reasons for
this
 phenomenon and some feasible
measurements
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measures
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 that can be solved.
This
 essay shall discuss it briefly in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin
 with, there are some main causes for increasing
fresh
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freshwater
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water
 demand
to
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apply
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around the world.
One
 of the notable reasons is
that
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the
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 growing
population
 day by day
in
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apply
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global
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globally
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, if the
population
 increases, the consumption ratio will
be increased
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increase
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 tremendously because
water
 is
utmost
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of utmost
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 importance
of
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to
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people
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people's
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 survival. Another main cause is
that
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the
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 overuse of agricultural practices which means 70% of the
water
 resources
spend
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are spent
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for
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on
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 farming.
For example
,
irrigation
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the irrigation
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 process can cause more
water
 usage in the farming land,
irrigation
 method of
water
 supply for
whole
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the whole
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 place of farming land
instead
 of needed
one
. There are some possible
solution
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solutions
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 that can be done by the
authority
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authorities
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 and individuals.
One
 of the feasible solutions is that the government should implement
the
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a
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water
 conservation project
from
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for
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rain
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rainwater
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water
 in order to people
can
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apply
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get more fresh
water
 from
the
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apply
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rain
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rainwater
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water
 purifications. Another main remedy is that individuals should not waste
water
 at their
home
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homes
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 which means they should close their taps
while
 brushing
teeth
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their teeth
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then
they
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apply
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open taps and the public might use drip
irrigation
water
 supply
instead
 of
irrigation
.
For instance
, China and Japan use drip
irrigation
process
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processes
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 by using pipes and tubes in their farming land and
this
 can lead to
save
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saving
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 more fresh
water
 for their next generation folks in future.
To conclude
, fresh
water
 is
inevitable
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an inevitable
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 fundamental
necessitiy
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necessity
necessities
 to around the world.
Water
 scarcity main reasons are
population
 growth
in
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around
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 the globe and overuse of
agricultura
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agricultural
agriculture
process
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processes
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.
However
,
this
 issue can be solved by the
water
 conservation project from the government and drip
irrigation
 and minimum use of
water
 at home
from
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by
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 individuals.
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