International fast
food
brands,
such
as
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and KFC, have gained popularity worldwide, which
therefore
triggers a concern for some people, claiming that the trend may exert a negative impact on both families and society. From my perspective, I cannot
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the opinion more, believing that under no circumstance should we ignore the downsides brought by the fast
food
industry.
On the one hand, the increasing number of citizens are
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snowed with work and study, driven by the fierce competition across the globe, which means that they need to fill their
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as soon as possible. Not only can fast-
food
restaurants save consumers' time and effort but they can
essential nutrients, which
therefore
are favoured by the young and old worldwide.
However
,
will take a toll in the long term. Eating outside frequently will dilute the relationship among family members.
For example
, there will be
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opportunities for children to talk with their parents, which could alienate their close ties.
Furthermore
, fast
food
cuisines are normally less nutritious than that of traditional dishes. With high
, high
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and high fat provided by
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fast
food
, it may result in some diseases related to the lack of sufficient and diversified
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, which in turn will place a heavy financial burden on both individuals and families.
For another, as fast
food
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prevalent,
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increasing number of citizens
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be diagnosed with obesity, diabetes and other diet-related illnesses.
As a result
, the government will spend more public
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on healthcare
instead
of education, scientific discovery and so on, which could get in the way of the country's development.
Moreover
, different from traditional cuisines featuring
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happiness and cultural inheritance, fast
food
is monotonous, which may not only deprive us of the pleasure brought
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the
food
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but
cherished cultures.
For instance
, the making of Jiaozi, or the Chinese dumplings represents a tradition followed from one generation to another.
Although
it is time-consuming, fast
food
is unable to replace it.
In conclusion, both families and societies definitely suffer a lot from the shift from traditional
food
to fast
food
and the trend should be reversed immediately as long as we want to live healthily and happily.