The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the stages

in

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making carbonated drinks.

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, man-made, linear process which starts with raw

water

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and

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results in the delivery of bottled and canned

water

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to supermarkets. First of all, the first

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is

water

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cleaning, where raw

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from the warehouse is filtered

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added with

water

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softener and chemicals. After that,

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2 of heating evaporation and carbonation involves

water

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to be

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pumped into electric heaters and

runned

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through a cooling pipe into a tank, where carbon dioxide is added. Following that, at the third

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, carbonated

water

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is

runned

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along a pipe to a mixing tank, where it is mixed with colouring, syrup and flavour. Once

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filtered again, at

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four,

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is filled into either bottles or cans and packaged into containers.

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, in the

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, the boxes are delivered to supermarkets for

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.The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and

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the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.