Much of the food people eat gets transported from farms thousands of miles away. Some believe it would be better for the environment and economy if people only ate food from local farmers. Would the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
The vast majority of
people
eat Use synonyms
bunch
of Add an article
a bunch
food
which Use synonyms
come
from Correct subject-verb agreement
comes
farms
located Use synonyms
from
far distances. Some Change preposition
at
people
think Use synonyms
that
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is
if Unnecessary verb
apply
people
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prefered
eating from only local farmers, it would be Correct your spelling
prefer
benefical
for both the environment and Correct your spelling
beneficial
economy
. There are some Correct article usage
the economy
noticable
advantages and different disadvantages, ı will discuss both of them and ı will give my opinion.
On the one hand, choosing only Correct your spelling
noticeable
notable
the
local farmers Correct article usage
apply
to
nutrition can lead to Change preposition
for
emerge
some problems. Verb problem
apply
Firstly
, when Linking Words
people
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decided
to eat Wrong verb form
decide
food
just from local farmers, they may encounter some Use synonyms
restriction
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restrictions
such
as Linking Words
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quality
of Correct article usage
the quality
product
. They have already lots of Add an article
the product
a product
option
which can reach the highest Fix the agreement mistake
options
quality
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food
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however
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food
only Use synonyms
surrounding
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from surrounding
farms
constrain their advantage of choosing amongst the different Use synonyms
quality
of foods. Use synonyms
Moreover
, there are Linking Words
not
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no
opportunity
to grow every Fix the agreement mistake
opportunities
food
in every place. If Use synonyms
people
did not eat the Use synonyms
food
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comes
from Correct pronoun usage
that comes
farms
long distance away, they would eat only specific Use synonyms
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food
that are able to Fix the agreement mistake
foods
grow
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be grown
this
local Linking Words
farms
.
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On the other hand
, Linking Words
people
's preferences to avoid Use synonyms
eat
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eating
food
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gets
transported from Correct pronoun usage
that gets
farms
thousands of miles away can create acceptable advantages. The most significant positive side is that it obviously can decrease transportation Use synonyms
cost
and Fix the agreement mistake
costs
this
budget may Linking Words
use
for developing Wrong verb form
be used
agriculture
system. Correct article usage
an agriculture
Furthermore
, there is no Linking Words
needs
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need
adding
some external Change the verb form
to add
chemical
to protect Fix the agreement mistake
chemicals
food
from Use synonyms
the
long Correct article usage
apply
distance
and Fix the agreement mistake
distances
ensuring
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ensure
to
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it
remain
fresh during long Wrong verb form
remains
journey
. Fix the agreement mistake
journeys
This
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make
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makes
people
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more
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apply
healtier
than previous. Take some Correct your spelling
healthier
village
, which Fix the agreement mistake
villages
they
use only Correct pronoun usage
apply
own
products, Correct pronoun usage
their own
for example
; they continue their life better compared to Linking Words
people
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live
in cities.
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who live
To conclude
, there are some reasonable disadvantages like Linking Words
restriction
of range of Add an article
the restriction
a restriction
quality
and Use synonyms
divesity
Correct your spelling
diversity
however
in my opinion the advantages that contribute to Linking Words
economy
and individuals' health Add an article
the economy
is
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apply
outweight
with Correct your spelling
outweigh
this
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assetion
.Correct your spelling
assertion
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