The table below shows how patients evaluated different services at three health centres. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture demonstrates how patients rated services at three different hospitals. The best clinic
according to
opinion
of people is Add an article
the opinion
Peveril
Centre
with the highest score in
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apply
overall
. On
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In
the
second place is Correct article usage
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Marchbank
Centre
and the worst health center
is Change the spelling
centre
Longston
Centre
.
In Peveril
Centre
the highest point was for Add a comma
Centre,
section
“Response to concerns” with 9.6, but in Correct article usage
the section
Longston
Centre
it was the lowest one of all with 4.3 from max grade – 10. Peveril
Centre
had the best grade for “Booking appointments”, instead
of another two centers
with 5.2 and 7.8. Change the spelling
centres
However
, in
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Longston
Centre
had one good mark for “Doctor`s service”, others were lower than 6,5. In Marchbank
Centre
and Peveril
Centre
the worst marks
for both was point “Pharmacy” (with 6,3 in Fix the agreement mistake
mark
Peveril
Centre
and 5.8 in Marchbank
Centre
). Also
, Marchbank
Centre
compete
with Wrong verb form
competed
Peveril
Centre
in Doctor`s service with 8,7 against 8,4, but second
one had Change the article
the second
bigger
rate. For “Care of children” the worst Correct article usage
a bigger
from
all variants was Change preposition
of
Longston
Centre
with 6.3,
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apply
when
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while
Peveril
Centre
and Marchbank
Centre
had
scored 7.5 and 7.3.Unnecessary verb
apply
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