The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by the UK residents in 1999. Summarize the information and make comparison. Write at least 150 words.

The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by the UK residents in 1999. Summarize the information and make comparison. Write at least 150 words.
The line chart provides information about
visitors
who came to the
UK
from outside from 1979 to 1999,
while
the bar chart illustrates the five countries (Turkey, Greece, the USA, Spain, and France) tourists to the
UK
in 1999.
Overall
, people who visit the
UK
are overseas residents, and people who are abroad in the
UK
experience an upward trend throughout the period. France was the country to visit the
UK
,
while
Turkey was the lowliest country visit to the
UK
. The number r
visitors
in 1979 was 10
million
who came abroad from the
UK
, or who visited overseas residents in 1999. the
UK
experienced an upward trend of
visitors
arriving abroad the
UK
under 39
million
and overseas residents above 50
million
. We can see in
this
bar chart that France is the most country who visited the d
UK
above 6
million
while
Turkey's lowest number of
visitors
arrived under 5
million
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, uk, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • upward trend
  • consistent increase
  • sharp rise
  • gradual growth
  • outbound travel
  • inbound tourism
  • popular destination
  • significantly outstripped
  • gap widened
  • given period
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