The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by the UK residents in 1999. Summarize the information and make comparison. Write at least 150 words.
The line chart provides information about
visitors
who came to the UK
from outside from 1979 to 1999, while
the bar chart illustrates the five countries (Turkey, Greece, the USA, Spain, and France) tourists to the UK
in 1999.
Overall
, people who visit the UK
are overseas residents, and people who are abroad in the UK
experience an upward trend throughout the period. France was the country to visit the UK
, while
Turkey was the lowliest country visit to the UK
.
The number r visitors
in 1979 was 10 million
who came abroad from the UK
, or who visited overseas residents in 1999. the UK
experienced an upward trend of visitors
arriving abroad the UK
under 39 million
and overseas residents above 50 million
.
We can see in this
bar chart that France is the most country who visited the d UK
above 6 million
while
Turkey's lowest number of visitors
arrived under 5 million
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