Some people say that children should play games which require teamwork such as football and basketball whereas, some think they should be doing individual sports such as swimming and running. Do you agree or disagree?

Sport

such

as

football

and basketball is needed by children to build up

teamwork

,

besides

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some juvenile argue that personal exercise either swimming or running are better than pairs. I believe that

teamwork

sports

have benefits

such

as

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the

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leadership and

gain

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the

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social interaction.

To begin

with,

teamwork

exercises are able to help us how to lead our

members

in the group. As an example, in

football

sport, in the

team

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team,

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we should choose one

reponsible

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responsible

person who

are

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able to direct their

members

well.

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act requires

to make

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the

football

playing is

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to

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going

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well and

able

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to win the match if they compete with other teams.

Besides

, leadership is

also

needed in work fields to

maintain

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the project

could run

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out fluently.

Furthermore

, it makes us able to have communication

skill

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which

it has

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function

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to generate

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all the

team

members

.

For instance

, in playing basketball, we need strategies

how

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on how

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to trick the

opposites

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team

. If our communication with all our member

team

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of team

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are

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is

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good, it will make the strategies work,

otherwises

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otherwise

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expected

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as we have planned, it could mess

the

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playing and the worst situation is that we are going to lose the playing. In conclusion,

teamworks

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teamwork

team works

in playing

sports

like

football

and basketball

are

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necesaary

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necessary

for children,

while

the opposite of it

such

as swimming and running or

it

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is

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calls

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individual

sports

are

also

important for them. But, I prefer

teamwork

sports

which have

advantages

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;

to organize

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the

members

well in the group and

to socialize

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socialising

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with all of the

members

.