The chart below shows figures for attendances at hospital emergency care departments in Northern Ireland by age group in December 2016 and 2017.

The graphics above depict attendance at emergency care departments of a hospital in Northern Ireland, comparing age groups in the months of December 2016 and 2017. The number of services is shown in attendance per 1000-population.
Overall
, every age
group
increased the number of cases from one year to another, in the same month. The elderly
group
(people over 75
years
old) was the
group
which increased more,
whereas
people within 16-44 increased less. Population above 75
years
old and children under 5
years
old are the two main categories in attendance per 1000-population. The cluster between 5 and 15
years
old was the
group
that used less
this
hospital. The classes aged 16-44, 45-64 and 65-74 are very similar because presented almost the same behaviour in the same period.
To sum up
,
this
bar chart can be a good tool to help the managers of these emergency care departments reallocate resources for a specific age
group
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words group, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • chart analysis
  • attendances
  • emergency care departments
  • trend
  • age group
  • patient admissions
  • year-on-year comparison
  • statistical variation
  • healthcare system
  • data interpretation
  • percentage increase/decrease
  • demographics
  • healthcare planning
  • resource management
  • peak times
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