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The graphs indicate the source of complaints about the Bank of America and the amount of time it takes to have the complaints resolved. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graphs indicate the source of complaints about the Bank of America and the amount of time it takes to have the complaints resolved. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The given pie chart illustrates the seven types of complaints from
the
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bank
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customers
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 in the USA about its services,
whereast
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whereas
 the table depicts the average time needed
for solving
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to solve
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 the problem by
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bank
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the bank
a bank
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 from 2000 to 2004.
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, over the period given, the highest proportion of
complaint
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complaints
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was from public
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bank's
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bank
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customers
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, whilst the lowest was the others. Turning
into
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 the information in more
details
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detail
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, we can see that 63 %
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bank
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of bank
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 complaints come from public users which is the highest presentation of
compalint
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complaint
 among those
customers
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.
Goverment
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Government
agencies just donated 11 %
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of complaint
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complaint
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complaints
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 which is only ahead of
out of state
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out-of-state
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 ( 10 %).
Bank
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also
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 received 3 % of the complaints from media and
bank
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 employees and the rest came from
others
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other
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customers
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 only 2 %. In terms of average time that
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bank
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the bank
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 needed
for
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to
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 solve the problem decreased over 5 years. In 2000
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bank
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banks
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 needed almost 5,8
hours
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for solving
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to solve
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 the problems.
This
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 figure
then
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 increased to more than 6
hours
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 in 2001 before
rose
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rising
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 again to 5
hours
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 in 2002. The time needed by
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bank
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the bank
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 increased to almost 5.7
hours
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 in 2003 and
then
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 declined to almost 4, 3
hours
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in
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at
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 the end of the period.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bank, customers, hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Customer service
  • Complaint resolution
  • Data trend
  • Source of complaints
  • Average handling time
  • Online platform
  • Telephone service
  • In-person interactions
  • Efficiency
  • Automated systems
  • Customer satisfaction
  • Bank's reputation
  • Improvements
  • Anomalies
  • Outliers
  • Benchmark
  • Resolution rate
  • Processing time
  • Service channels
  • Feedback mechanism
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