Some people say that economic development is necessary to reduce the poverty in the world. Others say that economic growth should be stopped immediately lo stop damaging the environment. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some

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of the society stated that financial growth is recommended to prevent hunger in the population

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others stand that environmental disaster is the effect of

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economic development so it should be stopped.

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essay will provide both views and my personal opinion. First of all, economic growth has fundamentally

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the rise of well-being in

community

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the community

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. It prevents hunger and

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poverty

by giving

public

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the access to increase their quality of life. Developing financial

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also

gives optimism for living in reality.

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, children who

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from low-budget

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will grow

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survival mode and rarely enjoy their sense of independence or existentialism. They barely know what they really want to do or to become in the future because the lack of money

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not inherently open how they see the world.

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, poor kids will just focus

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money

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for eat even though they

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enough time to reach their dreams.

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children tend to be more ambitious and dreamy for their future because their basic needs are already served by their parents and it provides hope growing up.

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, so-called

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achievement used to practice exploitation towards pristine nature in the name of gaining more income which

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to disastrous land. It is known to be less sustainable for the world to

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apply treatment. Many environmentalists stated that the natural habitat of

human kind

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humankind

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should be treated better so folks can celebrate longer lives.

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,

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and

sea

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are often contaminated by poisonous industrial chemicals which

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to limited clean water on

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. Apply situation should open the

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consciousness

of any manufacturers for environmental diseases in the future. In conclusion, Financial growth will give benefits to

human

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the human

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population as long as it is environmentally aware. I believe that many industries are thoughtful enough to provide different

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for their production process. Experts are

also

encouraged to focus on researching

about

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environmental issues

for helping

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companies to be more educated and effective

solving

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the problems.