The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words.
The table illustrates
the
UK unemployed allocated their Rephrase
how the
time
for what they doing according to
both gender and different time
interval
which Fix the agreement mistake
intervals
morning
and Add a missing verb
were morning
afternoon
in 1982. Overall
, whilst the women spend the vast majority of their time
for
housework both morning and Change preposition
on
afternoon
, the men used for
job hunting in the morning and Change preposition
to
then
their afternoon
passed
watching TV.
The major categories which took men's Verb problem
apply
time
in the morning was
job hunting, shopping and housework Change the verb form
were
in
turn 22%, 20% and 19% Change preposition
apply
nonetheless
, they preffered
to watch TV Correct your spelling
preferred
with
14% and handled to garden with 13% in the Change preposition
apply
afternoon
. Visiting town, playing sport
and drinking were not popular Fix the agreement mistake
sports
preference
for men not only in the morning but Fix the agreement mistake
preferences
also
in the afternoon
amongst
Change preposition
apply
all
categories.
Correct determiner usage
apply
On the other hand
, the women allowed their time
for housework with considerable
percentage Correct article usage
a considerable
49
% and 21%. The second popular tendency among the women was shopping with 26% in the morning and following hours,Change preposition
of 49
in addition
to this
, they visited their friends and relatives. They generally did not create time
for gardening or playing sport
in the morning. Fix the agreement mistake
sports
Moreover
, in the afternoon
, percentage
of staying Correct article usage
the percentage
bed
and playing sport Change preposition
in bed
were
0%.Change the verb form
was
Submitted by ilknurkaradmn on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words time, afternoon with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
▼