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The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The tabularized data provide the changes
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 forest
coverages
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coverage
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 on the 6 continents
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 the earth between 1990 and 2005.
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, the squares of the globe's forest do not change dramatically, yet we can break them into 3 categories based on the trend traits. category one bears slight changes in increase, it
inlcudes
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includes
 Asia and Europe. Asia's forest
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 from 576
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million
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hectares
 in 1990 to 584
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million
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hectares
 in 2005 and Europe
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a
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12
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million
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hectares
 addition in 2005's figure compared with 989
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hectares
 in 1990. North America and Oceania fall into category two, they both suffered a loss of 2
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hectares
 since 1990. North America
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 only 705 in 2005 and Oceania
shrinked
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shrank
 from 199 to 197. the
last
 category has a
relative
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siginificant
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significant
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constanct
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constant
 decrease in vegetation area. Africa's greenery
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as
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 749
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millions
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hectares
 in 1990,
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 to 709
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hectares
 and 691 in 2005. South America
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 only 882
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millions
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hectares
 in 2005, 66 deforested if we see the figure in 1990 is 946
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hectares
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words millions, hectares with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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