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The pie charts give information about the proportoin males and females in employment in six categories divided into manualand non-manual occupations

The pie charts give information about the proportoin males and females in employment in six categories divided into manualand non-manual occupations
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The given pie charts vividly illustrate some occupational trends in Great Britain in 1992.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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men
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 predominantly engage in more manual
work
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 than women.
For example
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, approximately a quarter of males tend to do
craft
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a craft
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 or similar,
whereas
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 a mere 3 per
cent
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 of females
does
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do
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 the same job. In general, manual
work
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 is preferred by fifty-two per
cent
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 of
men
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 and only by
the
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apply
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one third
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one-third
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 of ladies. Meanwhile,
womenfolk
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women
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 mostly
work
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 in white-collar professions and menfolk
work
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 in those vocations less, the figures were 69 per
cent
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 and forty-eight per
cent
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 respectively. Clerical or related careers are favoured by 31 per
cent
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 of women,
while
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 a modest six per
cent
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 of
men
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 pursue
the
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apply
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similar occupations.
However
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, general
laborers
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labourers
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 are selected by only one per
cent
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 of women and by 2% of
men
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, which is the smallest segment that represents the least common occupation.
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