The pie charts give information about the proportoin males and females in employment in six categories divided into manualand non-manual occupations

The pie charts give information about the proportoin males and females in employment  in six  categories  divided into manualand non-manual occupations
The given pie charts vividly illustrate some occupational trends in Great Britain in 1992.
Overall
,
it is clear that
men
predominantly engage in more manual
work
than women.
For example
, approximately a quarter of males tend to do
craft
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a craft
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or similar,
whereas
a mere 3 per
cent
of females
does
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do
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the same job. In general, manual
work
is preferred by fifty-two per
cent
of
men
and only by
the
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one third
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one-third
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of ladies. Meanwhile,
womenfolk
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women
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mostly
work
in white-collar professions and menfolk
work
in those vocations less, the figures were 69 per
cent
and forty-eight per
cent
respectively. Clerical or related careers are favoured by 31 per
cent
of women,
while
a modest six per
cent
of
men
pursue
the
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similar occupations.
However
, general
laborers
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labourers
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are selected by only one per
cent
of women and by 2% of
men
, which is the smallest segment that represents the least common occupation.
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