The pie chart show the trends in the Australian immigration from 1992 to 2002.

The pie diagrams demonstrate the shifts in immigrating to

Australia

between 1992 and 2002.

Overall

, people from 9

continents

moved

into

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Australia

. In both reported years, there were 3 major

continents

that had the

most

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percentage

. There were 2

continents

that remained unchanged. In 1992, it was obvious that the majority of the

immigrants

were from 3 main

continents

: Europe & former USSR accounted for 24%, Southeast Asia accounted for 21%, and Northeast Asia accounted for 20%.

Nonetheless

, in 2002, the proportion of these

continents

in immigration in

Australia

decreased. Meanwhile, the

percentage

of North America and

Middle

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East & North Africa

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the same at respectively 2 per

cent

and 7 per

cent

.

On the other hand

, the share of African

immigrants

was 3% in the first reported year, and it increased to 10 per

cent

in 2002.

Similarly

, Oceanian

immigrants

accounted for 10 per

cent

of the total

immigrants

in

Australia

in 1992;

however

, it rocketed to 22 per

cent

in the

last

reported year. In summary, the drop

of

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the

percentage

of 3 main

continents

in

the

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1992 was mostly posed by the increase in

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of

Oceanian

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who immigrated to

Australia

.