The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day.
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There are two line
graph
, the first one illustrates Fix the agreement mistake
graphs
the
each gender's participation Correct article usage
apply
of
several types of Change preposition
in
household
in a nation, Fix the agreement mistake
households
the
second one displays the time span they spend on each task per Correct word choice
and the
day
.
Overall
, it is clear that
more women do the household and they spend more time than men in
most Change preposition
on
task
. Fix the agreement mistake
tasks
However
, house repair is the only exception.
Over 80% of the female
spend their time Fix the agreement mistake
females
on
cooking, and it takes more than 80 Change preposition
apply
minutes
in their everyday life. In contrast
, only 60% of the male
cook at home, and it Fix the agreement mistake
males
cost
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costs
minutes
a day
. Similarly
, female also
participates more and longer in house cleaning, it is 60% of the participation and nearly 70 minutes
for
each Change preposition
apply
day
, which is 20% higher than men in both portions.
Nevertheless
, Male joins the house repairs more often, 20% of them join
take part in Verb problem
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this
household and spend about 20 minutes
per day
in
average, Change preposition
on
it
is twice more than Correct pronoun usage
which
female which
has only 8% participation and 5 Fix the agreement mistake
females who
minutes
each day
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