The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day.

The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day.
There are two line
graph
Fix the agreement mistake
graphs
show examples
, the first one illustrates
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
each gender's participation
of
Change preposition
in
show examples
several types of
household
Fix the agreement mistake
households
show examples
in a nation,
the
Correct word choice
and the
show examples
second one displays the time span they spend on each task per
day
.
Overall
,
it is clear that
more women do the household and they spend more time than men
in
Change preposition
on
show examples
most
task
Fix the agreement mistake
tasks
show examples
.
However
, house repair is the only exception. Over 80% of the
female
Fix the agreement mistake
females
show examples
spend their time
on
Change preposition
apply
show examples
cooking, and it takes more than 80
minutes
in their everyday life.
In contrast
, only 60% of the
male
Fix the agreement mistake
males
show examples
cook at home, and it
cost
Wrong verb form
costs
show examples
60
minutes
a
day
.
Similarly
, female
also
participates more and longer in house cleaning, it is 60% of the participation and nearly 70
minutes
for
Change preposition
apply
show examples
each
day
, which is 20% higher than men in both portions.
Nevertheless
, Male joins the house repairs more often, 20% of them
join
Verb problem
apply
show examples
take part in
this
household and spend about 20
minutes
per
day
in
Change preposition
on
show examples
average,
it
Correct pronoun usage
which
show examples
is twice more than
female which
Fix the agreement mistake
females who
show examples
has only 8% participation and 5
minutes
each
day
Submitted by chaoweikevin on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words day, minutes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: