The chart below shows the percentage of people who aten five portions of fruit and vegetable per day in the uk from 2001 to 2008

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illustrates

illustrate

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illustrates

the relative

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contribution

contributions

made by the people who consumed five

fruits

and

vegetable

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in a day Over the whole

time

period

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the

percentage

of eating

fruits

and

vegetables

by women,

men

and and

children

has

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difference

in

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from

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year

to

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.

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to women the

percentage

of

men

and

children

on

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devouring

fruits

and

vegetables

per day is quite low. The eating

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of eating

fruits

and

vegetables

by

children

is

remains

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12

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at 12

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from the

year

2001 to 2003.

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going to

applicable

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be applicable

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for

men

also

they

remains

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at 18

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per cent

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in the period which is mentioned for

children

. But both of them offered their

time

for consuming greens and wares

were

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gradually increased from the

year

2004.

On

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the

year

2006

percentage

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the percentage

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of

fruits

and

vegetables

haven by

children

is more than 20

at

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and at

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the same

time

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time,

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it is more than 25

by

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for

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men

as well.

Womens

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Women

remained a steady consumer of

time

in

uk

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UK

for devouring five

fruits

and

vegetables

especially

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, especially

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on

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in

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2006 it increased to 30

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per cent

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. But from the

year

2007

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2007,

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their concentration towards eating

fruits

and

vegetables

is declined.

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of consuming greens and wares in

the

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2008 is less than 30%

it

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which

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is slightly low when

comparing

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compared

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this

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with the

percentage

womens

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women

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have in the earlier years.