The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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the proportion

spending

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of spending

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time

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of

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several activities for adults in a specific country in two different years (1958 and 2008). At

the

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first glance, the adults spent their

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mostly

for

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apply

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working in both years. After their job, the amount of spending

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for

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sleeping is in second place in 2008 and 1958. In 1958, adult people spent on sleep by 32%

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separated

their

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for slumber by 25% in 2008.

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, the proportion of working

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% in 1958

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it was 42% in 2008. Going out with their family or friends for adults was important than other spare activities in 1958

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activity

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lost its value in 2008 their rates were respectively as follows 19% in 1958,

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and 6

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% in 2008. As can be seen, the lowest number of spending

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was travel with 2% in 1958 and

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proportion increased in 2008, it was 8%.