You paid a refundable deposit when you rented an apartment. You left the apartment in good condition but the Landlord won't return your deposit. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter explain why you are writing ask for the return of your deposit inform the landlord of possible legal action

Dear Mathews I am writing today out of disappointment, stemming from the fact that you haven't returned

my

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refundable amount that I

have

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paid before

shifting

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in

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my

apartment

. Despite addressing your concerns and providing evidence in the form of

apartment

pictures when I vacate

this

apartment

, I haven't heard back from you. It is been over a month since

i

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sent multiple

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requesting my deposit. Despite

this

, I

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to get any response from your side demonstrating your willingness to cooperate in

this

matter. It is illegal to put my deposit on hold in spite of proving through photographs that I vacated the

apartment

in a top-notch condition. I have some beautiful memories because your

apartment

brought me

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; my first child was born

while

I was staying here.

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Additionally

, I don't want to make any bitter memories and want to preserve our goodwill.

Therefore

, I request, once again, to process my refund. I have been very patient and understandably, waited for four weeks.

However

, if you still persist

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delay and fail to exhibit any effort to resolve

this

issue, I will leave with no choice but to resort to legal ways to procure my rightful deposit.

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will

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waste the time for both

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and I am sure you would not like to escalate the matter to

such

an extent. I hope that you

would

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understand the gravity of

this

situation and it is in the best interest

for

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both

us

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that

this

issue should

resolve

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without

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intervention

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the rental board. I will be waiting for your swift action and resolution to solve

this

matter. Thank you. Yours sincerely Rohit