Your child's teacher has requested a meeting with you this Friday to discuss your child's low test scores. Unfortunately, you cannot attend. Write a letter to your child's teacher. In your letter •Describe why you cannot attend the meeting •Explain how you have been helping your child study •Propose another time to meet
Dear Samantha
I am writing today to inform you with
a
regret that it is not possible for me to see you on 24 January as per your request to convene and discuss Remove the article
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about
the recent sub-par academic performance of Rohan.
I am currently in Remove the preposition
apply
the
Miami city for a business trip and as you might be aware through news channels, there Correct article usage
apply
has
been increased instances of thunderstorms and hurricanes, which, in turn, have flooded the highways. The government has Correct subject-verb agreement
have
also
warned against driving on roads and the airline services have also
been suspended for the next few days. Therefore
, it is not feasible for me to travel home and meet you the day after tomorrow.
I understand that Rohan's latest scores are concerning but he was immensely disheartened and morose going into the exam because we lost our beloved pet dog merely a couple of days before his exam. To some extend
, his poor performance is understandable as teenagers are not experienced enough to handle Replace the word
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such
shocking news during their exam days. I bought a new pet so hopefully that will cheer him up.
With that being said, I am still worried if
there are other factors that have contributed to his suboptimal marks. Do you have any spare time after 31st January ? I anticipate that I should arrive home by that time as Correct word choice
that
weather
is predicted to normalize after 28th January and roads will be safe to drive. 1st Feb morning is a perfect time for me. Please feel free to suggest Add an article
the weather
the other
date if it is inconvenient for you.
I am looking forward to Fix the agreement mistake
another
hear
from you. Your cooperation and understanding in Change the verb form
hearing
this
matter will be highly appreciated. Thank you.
Yours faithfully
RohitSubmitted by rohit.narad90 on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph sticks to a single idea, improving the logical flow between sentences for greater clarity.
coherence cohesion
Use appropriate salutations and closing statements that are formal and fit the context more precisely.
task achievement
Efficiently address all parts of the task, providing a clear explanation for your absence, details on how you support your child's education, and a firm proposal for a new meeting time.
task achievement
Maintain a formal and polite tone throughout the letter, which is mostly done well, but be mindful of the level of formality when discussing personal matters.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite