Nowadays, with the rapid development of sciences and technologies,
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range of
power
have been invented and widely used . Many
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that new
of
environmentalChange the adjective
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friendly
energy
like wind, water, and solar are too costly and difficult to generate than the traditional
power
which
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generated by coal, petroleum, and
gas
. The following essay will demonstrate my
opinion on new
sources
of
energy
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sources
of
energy
.
In terms of
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friendly
sources
, hydropower station
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widely used around the world, especially used in
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places
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has natural resources
such
as lakes. Solar
power
is widely used in many families. It is undeniable that these
sources
of
power
collect natural
energy
to produce reusable
energy
for our daily use, which reduces carbon
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.
However
, the cons still exist,
For example
, solar
energy
will be very efficient in places
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less sunlight, which will not be able to
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peoplesChange noun form
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demand for
energy
.
On the other hand
, coal and petroleum,
gas
are still very common in our daily lives. These
sources
of
powersFix the agreement mistake
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generates immediate and efficient
power
to meet the demand in our nowadays society.
For
if a road trip is scheduled, we would prefer to ride in a petroleum vehicle rather than an EV
due to
the fact that plenty of
gas
stations are easy to find on the route. A charging station will take a
while
to find.
Furthermore
filling
gas
takes
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minutes, but charging an EV takes half
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or an hour.
Nonetheless
, traditional
power
sources
will accelerate
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global warming.
In conclusion, new
sources
of
energy
are
environmentalChange the adjective
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friendly,
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could be extremely
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efficient under special circumstances. Traditional
power
sources
are more efficient and easy to satisfy
majorityCorrect article usage
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demandChange preposition
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.
it is not as
environmentalChange the adjective
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friendly as the new courses of
energy
that are reusable.