the bar chart below shows the percentage of australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

The depicted bar graph illustrates the
percentage
of Australian males and females in six distinct age groups who worked out on a regular basis in 2010.
Overall
, the most striking part would be there was no specific pattern between gender and physical movement,
however
, the
percentage
of elderly who were 65 years old and above, was approximately the same with 47.1% for
women
and 46.7% for
men
. As can be seen from the figure, there was a significant difference between
men
and female the age group of 34 to 44 with 53.3% of
men
and 39.5% of
women
.
Furthermore
, in all age groups, the
percentage
of
men
was slightly higher compared to
women
, except for the 15 to 24 group where the
percentage
of
women
was nearly 5% higher than
men
.
Additionally
, there was a plummet in the
percentage
of
men
aged 64 and above from 53% to 47.1%,
in contrast
, the mentioned
percentage
soared in
women
who aged the same from 45.1% to 46.7%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, women, men with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Physical activity
  • Regular exercise
  • Age demographics
  • Participation rate
  • Trend analysis
  • Gender disparity
  • Health initiatives
  • Public health policies
  • Statistical comparison
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Work commitments
  • Age-related factors
  • Preventative health
  • Exercise habits
  • Surveillance data
  • Motivators and barriers
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