the bar chart below shows the percentage of australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The depicted bar graph illustrates the
percentage
of Australian males and females in six distinct age groups who worked out on a regular basis in 2010.
Overall
, the most striking part would be there was no specific pattern between gender and physical movement, however
, the percentage
of elderly who were 65 years old and above, was approximately the same with 47.1% for women
and 46.7% for men
.
As can be seen from the figure, there was a significant difference between men
and female the age group of 34 to 44 with 53.3% of men
and 39.5% of women
. Furthermore
, in all age groups, the percentage
of men
was slightly higher compared to women
, except for the 15 to 24 group where the percentage
of women
was nearly 5% higher than men
. Additionally
, there was a plummet in the percentage
of men
aged 64 and above from 53% to 47.1%, in contrast
, the mentioned percentage
soared in women
who aged the same from 45.1% to 46.7%.Submitted by maryam.niknamm on
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