The charts give information about two genres of TV programmes watched by men and women and four different age groups in Australia.

The charts give information about two genres of TV programmes watched by men and women and four different age groups in Australia.
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The bar diagrams provide data about Australia's people's preference for watching two different genres of TV programs, observed in sexes and in 4 age groups.
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, the vertical bar charts compare reality shows and game shows and show the percentage in 6 bars: male, female, 16-24, 25-34, 35-44, and 45+.
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the statistics show the same tendency for females, the 16-24 group, and the 45+ group to watch
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types of shows, the other three groups display different reactions. More than half of Australian women watched
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reality shows (70%) and game shows (60%).
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to that,
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16-24 and 45+ age groups showed the same result for
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types of shows, respectively at a little bit more than 50% and almost 70%.
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to that, the men group only showed a positive reaction to game genres (60%), with only approximately 35% who watched the reality shows.
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