The maps below show the village of Stockford in 1930 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The maps
illustrates
how changes Change the verb form
illustrate
was happened
in the village of Change to the active voice
happened
stockford
in 1930 and 2010.
Correct your spelling
Rockford
stock ford
Overall
, the farmlands were replaced by the houses
and the large house
was replaced by the retirement home, many house
was build
for resistance.
Wrong verb form
built
According to
the maps show the northwest of stokeford
had shops and Change the capitalization
Stokeford
postoffice
and Correct your spelling
post office
this
was replaced by the
Correct article usage
apply
houses
but postoffice
only remained. The Southwest had the farmland but it was eliminated by the Correct your spelling
post office
houses
and new box shape
Replace the word
shaped
houses
were built with numerous houses
.
The north-east had the
farmland and Correct article usage
apply
this
was replaced by the
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apply
houses
and the primary school was enlarged with additional buildings. The garden was existed
and the large Change to the active voice
existed
has existed
house
was expanded by the new name which was the retirement home. There were many new bridges build
around the Change the form of the verb
built
houses
and near the primary school and retirement home had many house
around it.Change to a plural noun
houses
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