The maps below show the village of Stockford in 1930 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The maps below show the village of Stockford in 1930 and 2010. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The maps
illustrates
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illustrate
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how changes
was happened
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happened
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in the village of
stockford
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Rockford
stock ford
in 1930 and 2010.
Overall
, the farmlands were replaced by the
houses
and the large
house
was replaced by the retirement home, many
house
was
build
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for resistance.
According to
the maps show the northwest of
stokeford
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Stokeford
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had shops and
postoffice
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post office
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and
this
was replaced by
the
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houses
but
postoffice
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post office
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only remained. The Southwest had the farmland but it was eliminated by the
houses
and new box
shape
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houses
were built with numerous
houses
. The north-east had
the
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farmland and
this
was replaced by
the
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houses
and the primary school was enlarged with additional buildings. The garden
was existed
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existed
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and the large
house
was expanded by the new name which was the retirement home. There were many new bridges
build
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built
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around the
houses
and near the primary school and retirement home had many
house
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houses
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around it.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words houses, house with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • aerial perspective
  • land use
  • agricultural land
  • rural
  • urban development
  • housing estate
  • residential area
  • commercial area
  • business park
  • shopping center
  • infrastructure
  • construct
  • roundabout
  • disappearance
  • green spaces
  • complexity
  • transformation
  • expansion
  • modernization
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