You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work. Write a letter to the manager of the organization where you have been working. In your letter: - Describe the work you have been doing - Explain why you can no longer do this work - Recommend another person who is interested in the work.

Dear Sir or Madam,  I am writing to let you know that I have been working with your organization
since
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six months. I
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to volunteer in cleaning the lakes around the city and collect garbage from the
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.
Therefore
, it has always been a great experience for me to do something for the society.
This
is my
last
day with your company because I will not be able to come from next week. Let me explain my situation. You will be glad to know that I am offered a management position by my company but in another province.
Thus
, I am moving to Abbotsford, BC
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this
Sunday.
Moreover
, it is a wonderful opportunity for my career as I
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waiting for
this
moment since
last
year. I would like to
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my gratitude for allowing me to work with your organization and do something for the betterment of the community. One of my office
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Ramanpreet Kaur is willing to work with your team. I can assure you that she is a brilliant worker who wants to give back to the society.
Hence
, I really hope that you will give her a chance. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Simranpreet Kaur Bhullar
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task achievement
Make sure to address each bullet point with sufficient detail. While the letter touches upon each point, expanding on the details would enhance task achievement.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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