Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting. Write an essay expressing your point of view. Give reasons for your answers and provide relevant example and experience you might have.

There

has

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been

much

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discussions regarding

around

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the

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of guardians some consider females

achieve

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to achieve

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better parenting and

as a result

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,they have an

intrinsict

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intrinsic

value in

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bringing

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out the youngsters in

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,

while

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others consider

fathers

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can perform the same duties

as well as

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mothers

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.

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essay will delve into the details of my opinion

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this

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topic

in addition

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to some elucidations in order to

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my point of view.

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with,there is no doubt,

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role

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of

mothers

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is

an

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apply

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entirely different from the

role

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of

fathers

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in parenting. On account of the physiological component of

females

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females,

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they embrace their

children

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as much as they can in a procedure to offer

nourishing

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for them.

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,

meet

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their needs.To illustrate

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, the emotional

hormones

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level is very high in females , so women are urged to spend a great deal of time with their youths. Which is to

extent

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caused by these hormones. Not only

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,but

the

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breast feeding

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breastfeeding

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contributes to

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an upsurge

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upsurge

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the

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in the

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emotional

realtionships

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relationships

between

mothers

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and

children

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.

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, the dogma of

children

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is greatly influenced by

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mothers

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mothers'

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view

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views

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.

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, the

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usually puzzle their

brain

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brains

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in order to extract

the

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apply

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suitable and reasonable ideas and provide their

children

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with these notions. So as the aforementioned elaborations

on

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apply

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it seems to me that the effects of

mothers

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in raising

the

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apply

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children

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in

society

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are very valuable. Regarding the

role

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of

fathers

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, there is no way to ignore the impact of

fathers

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in parenting

as well as

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up his daughters and sons in

society

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.

while

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it's believed by some that

fathers

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usually struggle with

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tests

job owing to offering a delighted life for their

children

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, I am inclined to think neither. In

this

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, the

fathers

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don't spend a great deal of time with their

children

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. So, what the

mothers

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have to

is

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compensate

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this

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for this

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absence.

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, the youths appeal to follow their

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mothers

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mother's

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recommendations. By dint of the given reason, the

children

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mimic their

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mothers

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mother's

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attitude.

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,

this

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will reflect directly on the

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children

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children's

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behaviors

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behaviours

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in

society

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. In a nutshell, after a thorough analysis of the mentioned topic, it is predicted that bringing up

the

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apply

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children

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in

society

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is partially

due to

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the

role

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of

mothers

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in parenting which

is

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apply

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can not be performed by

fathers

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.

Therefore

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,

fathers

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are not as good as

mothers

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in parenting.