The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house). The second chart show the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house). The second chart show the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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first chart compares the proportion of males and females participating in four types of duties at home, and the second chart demonstrates the average quantity of
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they spent doing those duties.
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, cooking and cleaning are the two tasks that were performed by the largest percentage of both males and females and the two tasks that
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and
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spent the most
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performing. Looking at the first bar chart, the majority of
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participate in cooking and cleaning, with 80% and 60% respectively, which is 20% greater than the percentage of
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doing those tasks.
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, house repairs are done mostly by
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, with 20%, which is double that of
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while
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there is a slightly larger proportion of
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involved in taking care of pets, at 20%. With regards to the average
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,
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spend 70 to 90 minutes per day on cooking or cleaning
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the figures for
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are slightly less, at approximately 50 to 60 minutes per day.
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the amount of
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consumed on pet care shares the same figure in both genders at approximately 20 minutes per day, the volume of
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men
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spend on house repairs is double the figure for
women
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words time, men, women with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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