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The graph gives information about coffee production in 4 different countries from 1990 to 2010.

The graph gives information about coffee production in 4 different countries from 1990 to 2010.
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The bar chart illustrates the manufacturing of
coffee
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 in four nations, including
Brazil
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, Colombia,
Indonesia
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, and Vietnam, over the
period
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 from 1990 to 2010.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the production of
coffee
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 in
Brazil
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,
Indonesia
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, and Vietnam followed an upward trend,
while
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 the opposite was true for Columbia.
Moreover
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,
Brazil
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 had the highest
coffee
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 production in the whole
period
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. Beginning at 0.7
million
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tonnes
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 in 1990, there was a significant rise to 1
million
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tonnes
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 in the amount of
coffee
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 produced in
Brazil
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 during the first five years, compared to just 0.2
million
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tonnes
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 which stayed unchanged in
Indonesia
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. The figures in
Brazil
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 witnessed a dramatic climb to 1.5
million
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tonnes
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 in 2000, reaching a peak at 1.9
at the end
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 of the
period
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 and holding the first position among the four countries. A slight increase to 0.4 was experienced in the figure for
Indonesia
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 over 15 years later. Regarding the production of
coffee
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 in Columbia, the
period
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 between 1990 and 2000 witnessed a gradual drop from 0.6
million
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tonnes
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 to 0.4
million
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tonnes
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, which stayed unchanged until 2010. Vietnam had the lowest
coffee
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 manufacturing in the whole
period
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, with 0.1
million
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tonnes
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 at the beginning of the
period
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; after that, it grew constantly to 0.3
millions
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tons in 2010.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, brazil, indonesia, period, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
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