The graph gives information about coffee production in 4 different countries from 1990 to 2010.

The graph gives information about coffee production in 4 different countries from 1990 to 2010.
The bar chart illustrates the manufacturing of
coffee
in four nations, including
Brazil
, Colombia,
Indonesia
, and Vietnam, over the
period
from 1990 to 2010.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the production of
coffee
in
Brazil
,
Indonesia
, and Vietnam followed an upward trend,
while
the opposite was true for Columbia.
Moreover
,
Brazil
had the highest
coffee
production in the whole
period
. Beginning at 0.7
million
tonnes
in 1990, there was a significant rise to 1
million
tonnes
in the amount of
coffee
produced in
Brazil
during the first five years, compared to just 0.2
million
tonnes
which stayed unchanged in
Indonesia
. The figures in
Brazil
witnessed a dramatic climb to 1.5
million
tonnes
in 2000, reaching a peak at 1.9
at the end
of the
period
and holding the first position among the four countries. A slight increase to 0.4 was experienced in the figure for
Indonesia
over 15 years later. Regarding the production of
coffee
in Columbia, the
period
between 1990 and 2000 witnessed a gradual drop from 0.6
million
tonnes
to 0.4
million
tonnes
, which stayed unchanged until 2010. Vietnam had the lowest
coffee
manufacturing in the whole
period
, with 0.1
million
tonnes
at the beginning of the
period
; after that, it grew constantly to 0.3
millions
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, brazil, indonesia, period, million, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
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