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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university ald after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university ald after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the pie
chart
 illustrates the destination of Anthropology graduates after Passing related Courses,
also
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and also
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 the
depicts
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apply
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rate of anthropology
incomes
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income
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after
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apply
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five years
since
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after
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 their graduation from a particular university.
Overall
, as
it
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apply
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can be seen, the greatest segment of
pie
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the pie
a pie
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chart
 is occupied
with
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by
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 the graduated students, who have
full time
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full-time
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 work,
whereas
, The lowest level of
pie
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the pie
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chart
belong
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belongs
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 to those individuals, who Find
Part time
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Part-time
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 work
besides
 postgraduated Study.
According to
 the given table, about 50% of
people
, who choose to be a member of the government Sector have more than $100, 00 wage over a period of five years, whilst the number of
people
 whose , salaries are between 25000
to
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 49,999 is Just 5%.
Furthermore
, Most of the
people
,who work as an employee for private companies receive a Salary between 50,000 to 74,999 (%35), whilst the quantity of staff who get more than 100,000 per month is 30%.
To sum up
, Turning to the
chart
, less than half of undergraduate anthropology tend to have another form of job, and 8% of these
people
 hate obscure positions.
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