The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the transformation of
prices
for Use synonyms
copper
, nickel, and Use synonyms
zinc
per month in 2014, with the data measured in percentages. Use synonyms
Overall
, it is evident that Linking Words
the
Correct article usage
apply
zinc
Use synonyms
prices
increased throughout the period, Use synonyms
while
others decreased.
In terms of the highest changes, nickel stood at 6% in January. It witnessed a significant decline to 1% in March. Linking Words
Moreover
, Linking Words
Linking Words
this
changes still continued until June with Correct determiner usage
these
the
rates of 3% before Correct article usage
apply
bounced
back to 1% in December. Wrong verb form
bouncing
Additionally
, Linking Words
this
fluctuation made the Nickel as the lowest changes Linking Words
in
the end of the period.
Regarding the remaining metals price, Change the preposition
at
zinc
and Use synonyms
copper
began at 1% and 2% in January, respectively. Use synonyms
While
the Linking Words
zinc
Use synonyms
prices
rose slightly to 3% in the first 2 Use synonyms
month
before Change to a plural noun
months
fell
to -1% in June, the Wrong verb form
falling
copper
Use synonyms
prices
since the beginning experienced a moderate fall to around -0.5% in May. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, in December, with Linking Words
0.5
% difference, the rates of change in the Correct article usage
a 0.5
zinc
Use synonyms
prices
overtook the Use synonyms
copper
Use synonyms
prices
at 0.5%.Use synonyms
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words prices, copper, zinc with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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