The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The diagrams above show the various stages and equipment used to make
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is used to make concrete.
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, in order to create concrete the Linking Words
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2 ingredients, limestone and clay, are put through a crushing machine to create a form of Add a comma
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powder. Use synonyms
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goes through a mixer. The next stage involves the powder being heated in the rotational heater, which will Linking Words
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be taken through the grinder. At Linking Words
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point the Linking Words
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has been created and is ready to be put into bags.
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(15%), alongside water (10%), sand (25%) and gravel (50%), is Use synonyms
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churned through a concrete mixer. Linking Words
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creates concrete which, is now Linking Words
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fit to be used for building purposes.Unnecessary verb
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