you recently organised an all- day meeting for your compagny, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participant at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were un happy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter - say what the participants liked about the hotel - explain why they were unhappy about the food - suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to submit my feedback about the meetings of the company Where
hold
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held
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the Palza
Palza
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Plaza
Hotel
. As I was organiser of the event was going well and participants of the meetings liked the hotel
unless the lunch meals. Firstly
, all the staffs who work there were warm
welcome and the reception has a comfort sitting with fascinating decorations. Change the word
warmly
Additionally
, the meeting hall is provided by
Change preposition
with
control
system air Correct article usage
a control
conditionan
and excellent light. Even more, you can notice the cleanest of the Correct your spelling
conditioning
conditioner
hotel
even the toilets, Hence
all participants
were very pleasant and convenient Correct article usage
the participants
while
other
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others
inconvenient
with the main lunch.
The restaurant was open late after an hour of waiting which Add a missing verb
were inconvenient
effect on
the meeting time,
The cuisine Was cold with un-fresh Salad and fruit, they were unfamiliar dishes Correct your spelling
affected
with
the customers leading some individuals Change preposition
to
remain
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to remain
hunger
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hungry
instead
of eating foreign meals.
Kindly, I suppose from
you Change preposition
apply
to
take much care of the lunch services to ensure the Fix the infinitive
apply
hotel
's commitment to the
quality. Correct article usage
apply
This
quality reaches out by service diversity
flavoure foods which Replace the word
serving diverse
matching
all Wrong verb form
match
the
nationalities.
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apply
Also
, prepare the meals in particular
dishes to remain hot at time
of service.
I hope to take my consideration and looking forward to your response.
Faithfully yours.
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each new idea is presented in a separate paragraph to maintain clarity and structure.
coherence cohesion
Use salutations appropriate to the context, such as 'Dear Hotel Manager', to improve the greeting and closing of the letter.
coherence cohesion
The letter should have a clear structure with an appropriate introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
task achievement
Be sure to respond fully to each point listed in the task prompt in a consistent and clear manner.
task achievement
Use a formal tone suitable for a complaint letter, avoiding overly casual language or contractions.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.